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I did like the fight scene between the Kurgan and the Blood Pack Mercenary. Though of course the drinking game between him and Patriarch was awesome and how he had a hang over with Aria in bed with him. Can't wait to read the new chapter.
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Glad you liked it and you don't have to wait that much
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The drinking game actually felt a little...lack luster to me, but it was interesting nonetheless.

And what did Kurgan do the Quataran? Torture or....well im not saying what else because i hate that word lol

Overall, another good addition! Keep it up!
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Gojira21 wrote:The drinking game actually felt a little...lack luster to me, but it was interesting nonetheless.

And what did Kurgan do the Quarian? Torture or....well im not saying what else because i hate that word lol

Overall, another good addition! Keep it up!
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Gojira21 wrote:And what did Kurgan do the Quataran? Torture or....well im not saying what else because i hate that word lol
I'll give you a hint it starts with a ''R'' and ends with a ''e''
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Ah, i figured as much lol
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It would happen one chapter or another
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True, as you have made Kurgan one devilous SOB lol
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Gojira21 wrote:True, as you have made Kurgan one devilous SOB lol
I'm just perfecting what was done in the movie
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Tis a good chapter and I'm glad we finally see Shepard come in. Also as usual the Kurgan is just as funny as ever. Keep up the good work my friend.
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Alright, nice to Shepard finally introduced. Plus, seems like everyone wants the Archangel dead lol.

A few parts seemed a little hard to follow, but no worries. I'm curious as to see how Shepard and Kurgan will act towards one another. And damnit, Kurgan seems to like killing all the females huh? Lol
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Gojira21 wrote: I'm curious as to see how Shepard and Kurgan will act towards one another.
That part I'm still thinking about how I'm going to do
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Alright, we'll look forward to it!
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Good chapter and I liked how The Kurgan was able to take a ship for himself and supply Aria with new troops. Also the fight between Kane and the Kurgan was fun to read.
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GodzillavsJason wrote:Good chapter and I liked how The Kurgan was able to take a ship for himself and supply Aria with new troops. Also the fight between Kane and the Kurgan was fun to read.
You were expecting anything else from the Kurgan???
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Soooooo only gripe is, how did Kurgan get to the ship? You just jump right into it without some leeway, can make it confusing

But with that aside, good chapter lol looks like Aria has quite the army now, and Kane is always getting the best of Kurgan.
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You guess how he did it. Just kidding you really aren't spose to know it just starts off in the ship.

Yeah she as and I might use that for something and next fight they have will be the last.
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Lol alright, makes sense

Well I look forward to it, how much longer is the planned on being?
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