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Hmm this was quite interesting and a good cliffhanger. Can't wait to see more.
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Corzak The Mighty wrote:Hmmmm.... I wonder what assailed Satori. I suppose we'll find out!
I forgot to mention my character is a sexual predator. He pounces on the first hot chick he sees and Satori...yeah. Not my fault.
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Booyah! First demon mentioned baby!... Okay... I'll go cry in my corner now...

But on a serious note, wow. I Didn't expect action this soon...

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Chapter two is up.
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So it wasn't me then? Hmph... :lol: Good work, Flygon.
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Good work Flygon King and hoping to see chapter 3 soon. :D
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:O

I'M SO SORRY FLYGON I DIDN'T MEAN TO HIT YOU WITH A FIREBALL

Well, actually, I should say I didn't mean to send you flying out of a window :P

Good chapters, I'm liking the story so far, you're always good with the magical/fantasy genre. Very funny too hehe ^_^ Can't wait to see more soon!
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Mara and Persephone are here? Heh. I almost expect Fenris to be the class pet.

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HayesAJones wrote:Mara and Persephone are here? Heh. I almost expect Fenris to be the class pet.
GAH! Why didn't I think of that? Awwwww.... Now I wish I had done that.
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Flygon King wrote:
HayesAJones wrote:Mara and Persephone are here? Heh. I almost expect Fenris to be the class pet.
GAH! Why didn't I think of that? Awwwww.... Now I wish I had done that.
It's probably for the best. Having students sporting bloody stumps because they petted too hard wouldn't reflect well on the school, I think.

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NSZ wrote:Yay new chapter!

Not gonna lie, I actually did a double take at the part with the school rules because I had just started watching Rosario + Vampire the day before signups went up. Not a complaint, just funny.
Hehehehehe. Well, this was partially inspired by that series. I did enjoy watching Rosario+Vampire and I decided that a simila rpremise going in its own direction would be fun to try out.
HayesAJones wrote:It's probably for the best. Having students sporting bloody stumps because they petted too hard wouldn't reflect well on the school, I think.
Lawl. None of these students from what's been revealed thus far are as dumb or as obliviou sas Blakc Dragon, nor are they as durable... Great, now I want to add Black Dragon in as well... AUUUUUGH!
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Flygon King wrote:
HayesAJones wrote:It's probably for the best. Having students sporting bloody stumps because they petted too hard wouldn't reflect well on the school, I think.
Lawl. None of these students from what's been revealed thus far are as dumb or as obliviou sas Blakc Dragon, nor are they as durable... Great, now I want to add Black Dragon in as well... AUUUUUGH!
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Flygon King wrote:Great, now I want to add Black Dragon in as well... AUUUUUGH!
He could be the mentally troubled janitor!

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Corzak The Mighty wrote:BD: Durrr, how do I work mop?
And then he ripped his own arm off.

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Alright, so I'l already working on chapter 3. a few questions I would like to ask my readers are: What is it about this story do you like? Why do you like it? What is there that you don't like? How can I improve on it? What would you like seen done? THese will help me make the future chapters even better that what is already out.
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So far, I'm liking the idea of 'human studies.' Could lead to some pretty funny stuff if they're as misinformed about us as we are about them. I think human field work could be pretty damn entertaining.

And class pet Fenris.

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I agree with what Hayes pointed out. It certainly is the standout quality of the story. I'm not sure what the antagonizing character, characters, or force is yet, so I can't say too much about that right now.

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Well, only been two chapters so far, so I can't really say all that much, but I always like fantasy stories (especially yours...always entertaining), and quite funny as well. So far, not really seen anything I dislike, so keep up the good work!
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