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You can either attach the file or just copy and paste it into the e-mail. I'd prefer you to copy and paste though, because Word doesn't operate on my computer.
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hey im done what should i do now
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oh ok its anguirus vs battra
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Sounds like an interesting match. I look forward to reading it.

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ok i just go upstairs and use my own computer if my brother is not on it
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i sended it hope you like it
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are u gonna read it
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Already have. I've also sent an e-mail in reply to it. Here it is:
Sorry to tell you this, but I can't put this in my M.F.C. I have standards and this simply doesn't meet the. Ignoring grammar and factual errors (Gamer is Guardian of the Universe, Battra is the Black Mothra) there's a skeleton of a decent match in there. If you can lengthen it and make it bother easier and more enjoyable to read (Imagery! Figurative language! All that jazz.) I'll be happy to put it in. But not in this raw form. Sorry to disappoint you.

But you could always just put it in the fan Fiction section as it is.
Sorry. It's a nice little read, but not detailed or solid enough. But keep writing. The more you write, the better you get.

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i come up with another
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Try to flesh it out more. Put some pizazz in it. And please, please capitalize. Grammar is a biggie for me.

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im working on the next one king kong vs gigan
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this always reminded me of the K.W.C and other fight shows (jurassic fight club,animal face off,versus,etc) and i gotta admit its cool
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hey im already working on it what should i have to with grammer
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Er... make it correct?

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im doing king kong vs gigan
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this inspired me to make another fanfic its called kaiju wars and its gonna be when kaiju attack yadda yadda we know the deal exept that it will have one fight per fanfic story
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Glad you enjoyed it that much!

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ok u can spice ir up a little
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Thanks! I'll do that between now and tomorrow and then post it.

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are u going to put in in the monster fight club
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