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War in Skyrim discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:28 pm

Decided to upload this story in parts. Basically a huge war in Skyrim. What'ca think?
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Re: War in Skyrim discussion

Postby Flygon King » Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:47 pm

...Once again, randomess overtakes coherance and plot...

I'm sorry, these kinds of things were funny at the start, but now, it's getting a tad irritating. WHere'd the coherance in plot? WHERE IS THE PLOT?!?! It's just... complete, blind randomness. How did these characters get there? Did they bribe the nearest Relaity Warper to drop them in Skyrim? And why are they so out of character?

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Re: War in Skyrim discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:52 pm

Flygon King wrote:...Once again, randomess overtakes coherance and plot...

I'm sorry, these kinds of things were funny at the start, but now, it's getting a tad irritating. WHere'd the coherance in plot? WHERE IS THE PLOT?!?! It's just... complete, blind randomness. How did these characters get there? Did they bribe the nearest Relaity Warper to drop them in Skyrim? And why are they so out of character?

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Flygon King you're friends with Asmodues, have her loyal servant Ultra Red get you some meds and then shortly after that ride on Giratina into the sunset. That will make your head stop hurting. 8-)

But seriously what does Godzilla have to do with Skyrim, I may not know a lot about Skyrim but this just doesn't make sense. . Also another thing to add, stop putting memes like Panis cupcake because it's not funny it never was funny in these types of stories. Another thing that I should probably mention, why should we care about these characters and what their motives are because they're not showing any sign of motives except randomly appearing out of no where just like pixie dust that just came out of a fairy's ass. So please! Please! Have them have a reason for being there.
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Re: War in Skyrim discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 9:04 am

Added new part, and just to help you guys understand, think of it like this: Pretty much all the universes are one in this AU and every part of each universes' land is all part of one big continent. And all these characters have followed each other's power to duel with each other. It's pretty much like the KWC match Everyone vs Everyone. There's really no need for a plot. It's just a war fic.

BTW, what theme do you guys think could fit with this fic? I was thinking either At Doom's Gate, or Crocodile Cacophony.
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Re: War in Skyrim discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 6:43 pm

Added next part. Enjoy.
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Re: War in Skyrim discussion

Postby Venom 2009 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:42 pm

I like this story!

For your question, I think you should used the At Doom's Gate theme.

Also, an idea, how about adding King Harkinian into the story? If not, that's ok.
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