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After reading Godzilla vs Orga ( http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... 18&t=10514 ) you can say what you think of it and ask anything you want about it.
I know that the kaiju aren´t like there original versions but it's fiction.
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There was no reason to make a separate page for opinions and comments.
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MaxRebo320 wrote:There was no reason to make a separate page for opinions and comments.
If you look around this board,you'll see that every fan fic has a discussion topic.

You're supposed to make a seperate topic for discussion so the topic the story is in doesn't get cluttered.

In fact,the description for this board says it is recommended that you do so.
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^He's absolutely right.

And pta917, I don't mind if the kaiju aren't exactly like their original version. Actually, I support it. A monster's design and powers can vary depending on the author. Even Toho does it. If it's done right in a fan fic, it can help make them more memorable.
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Kaiju-King42 wrote:And pta917, I don't mind if the kaiju aren't exactly like their original version. Actually, I support it. A monster's design and powers can vary depending on the author. Even Toho does it. If it's done right in a fan fic, it can help make them more memorable.
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A good thing. I'm okay with it.
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Kaiju-King42 wrote:A good thing. I'm okay with it.
Ok, thanks
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It was decent. I would work on more of a storyline and description, but a good go.
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Story I really don't give it a big one its just the monster origen and the fight, but yeah I still can improve the description
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I made another chapter on the fight so go see it.
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