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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:29 pm

Added the last part of Chp 2 that forgot to add the other day lol enjoy
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:42 pm

Interesting last bit with Hicks. If I ever become a soldier, I know to sleep right before we drop down for a mission and that's why Hicks survives Aliens. :P But great chapter. :mrgreen:
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:46 pm

lol nice man and thats true thats why i love Hicks! 8-) but thanks man
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:48 pm

Gojira21 wrote:lol nice man and thats true thats why i love Hicks! 8-) but thanks man


Yeah he was cool but it sucks that he dies in 3 at the beginning.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:50 pm

Lol yes i know -_- it pissed me off
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:42 pm

So new chapter is up! Things are going to get a little interesting and i bet no-one will predict waht happens 8-)
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:43 pm

This should be fun. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:46 pm

Thanks, lol there will some interesting things to happen
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:48 pm

well, this is going along swell. i wish i could have put up this chapter, but there's so little one can do with a 3DS...
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:52 pm

Dont worry about Flygon lol For now im leaving your idea u gave me open in this story for it to happen so you can add a chapter or so if you want when you can...but its only for a short period of time untill i close it with what i have instore lol
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:57 pm

Well, seeing as i'm stuck with this 3DS until my laptop's devirused...
Hope... I will find it!

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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jul 03, 2012 7:03 pm

Lol alright, well im probably still incorporate some of your idea soo still welcome to write whenever u can dont rush yourself
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:45 pm

Chap 4 is up! All three of are major characters are finally meeting each other...again! Although it might be short lived lol
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:49 pm

Nice little Xeno survivor reunion we have here and I wonder what Bryce wants to talk to them for? But great chapter. :mrgreen:
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:53 pm

Eh, you will see lol but glad you enjoyed
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:00 pm

Next Chapt is up! Now i know the science i described in this section is a little out dated and probably not explained the best but...idc lol enjoy!
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:18 pm

A decent chapter. Some good character development, and... Just what DID create it?
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:45 pm

Constructed by who? A great way to have a cliffhanger. Good job sir. :D
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:07 am

Thank you, glad you both enjoyed it 8-) and...well Flygon wouldnt you like to know lol
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:58 pm

That had to be the longest set of Dialogue i have ever put in a single chapter o_O..But it is up! and we have some...more interesting developments 8-)
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