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Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:25 pm

The name is self explanitory. This was actually an old story of mine that i happened to find on a old flashdrive from like 2008! So i decided to fix it up a little, add more detail and posted it here to see what every thinks. If it gets off well, maybe might work on it more. Its basically taking place after Aliens, and completely ignores what Alien 3 and 4. SOoo well enjoy
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:27 pm

If it weren't for the fact that you already have the entire story done and are just posting it here, I'd be glad to come up with ideas for you... dangit!

Oh well. I'll enjoy it....
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:31 pm

Who ever said i had entire story done?? lol i never said that...haha and your more than welcome to give your ideas Flygon i basically wrote the beginning of this on whim not much more is planned
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:39 pm

I had an Alien fanfic idea myself, but I'm interested in seeing what could happen here.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:42 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Who ever said i had entire story done?? lol i never said that...haha and your more than welcome to give your ideas Flygon i basically wrote the beginning of this on whim not much more is planned


I thought you said this was an old story of yours? Are you telling us that you only had this much written out back then?
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:43 pm

Really? u should have wrote it lol srry im on a big Alien mood as of lately haha and well i am too also interested on where this could turn up at it

@Fygon yes i did lol it was only the beginning and then for whatever reason i lost track of it
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:12 pm

Next part is up if anyone is curious lol
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:13 pm

I could imagine something like this being made into a film. This is gonna get interesting, I know it. :)
It makes my idea not look that good.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:15 pm

Lol it will be trust me and out of curiosity what was your idea?? maybe we can incorporate similar ideas 8-)
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:17 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Lol it will be trust me and out of curiosity what was your idea?? maybe we can incorporate similar ideas 8-)

I was thinking of something like a virus that causes creatures to either become hosts for Xenos or even become Xenos themselves. It would've even had a Xeno-Gwangi of some kinds, and some of my own personal designs for Xenomorph species.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:23 pm

Hmm that does sound interesting actually, especially the virus angle
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:25 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Hmm that does sound interesting actually, especially the virus angle

Yeah, I was thinking the virus would be able to go in the form of spores or liquids, with the spores being able to go to distant planets. But whatever you want to do with your fic is fine.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:30 pm

Lol its an intriquing idea i probably wont do that, i mean its your idea i dont want to take it
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:52 am

Really interesting AU we have here and can't wait to see what else Weyland Utani is up to. :mrgreen:
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Jun 20, 2012 1:51 pm

Even i do not know what Weyland Yutani will do next 8-)
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:29 pm

Added the last part of Chp 2 that forgot to add the other day lol enjoy
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:42 pm

Interesting last bit with Hicks. If I ever become a soldier, I know to sleep right before we drop down for a mission and that's why Hicks survives Aliens. :P But great chapter. :mrgreen:
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:46 pm

lol nice man and thats true thats why i love Hicks! 8-) but thanks man
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:48 pm

Gojira21 wrote:lol nice man and thats true thats why i love Hicks! 8-) but thanks man


Yeah he was cool but it sucks that he dies in 3 at the beginning.
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Re: Alien: Genesis Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:50 pm

Lol yes i know -_- it pissed me off
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