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The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gexistentialist » Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:09 pm

I've finally decided to get something written. YAY! Any questions, comments, etc. will be posted here, and NOT on the main thread.
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:57 pm

A Very good start! i liked it, cant wait to see more
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby KaijuX » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:37 pm

Well well, it seems that you got the email. ;) Well placed. And interesting that the final title is King of the Monsters... Most fitting, I guess. :D Finally a start, after all of these years of jibber-jabbering ideas. So far, looking good. Though all I can really say is that after the prologue sequence, it just feels... Short. Too me, that is. Short in the sense that it's like a paragraph or two, but otherwise distinctive strong points. Of course let's see how things play out from here before I say anything else. ;)

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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gexistentialist » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:41 pm

Thanks, Andrew!
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:50 pm

Nice start, I'll be waiting for more.
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gexistentialist » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:39 am

Just to get a conversation started while KaijuX writes some, Ghidorah is one sick sonuvabitch in this story.
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:10 pm

How sick is he going to be? Ive always wanted to see Ghidorah made into one scary, sick, devilous sonuvabitch
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gexistentialist » Wed Jun 20, 2012 5:25 am

I have always seen King Ghidorah as being something of a nihilist. A sort of anti-God, he believes he is doing "custodial work" by wiping the universe clean of life, and that "anything that exists exists without (his) permission." In the process of slaughtering entire civilizations and raping planets, he finds some perverse satisfaction in the sheer concept of destroying things; he comments in the opening that the sky of Venus was one of the most beautiful things he had ruined. Throughout the story, he makes no attempt to hide his monstrousness. He sees something truly amazing about Earth, in that human and kaiju alike are so f*cked up. Ghidorah hopes that during his stay, they will learn to die.

Ghidorah senses Godzilla as a worthy opponent, in that his fall will be instrumental to his destruction of Earth; a domino effect. Amongst other atrocities to numerous to mention, Ghidorah harvests the souls of innocents, slaughters Glenn Amer's fellow pilots, and practically gives a Hannibal Lecture to the King of the Monsters and the human characters. Believe it or not, I considered having Godzilla get completely curbstomped in his first bout with King Ghidorah. The bastard even goes so far as to rip off his tail and taunt him and the people of Japan with it. Don't worry, though... Godzilla does not give in that easily.
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Re: The King of the Monsters Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Jun 20, 2012 7:13 am

Damn, that does sound pretty diabolic! Ive always liked that kind of aspect for King Ghidorah though. THis should be truly interesting to see, and rips of Big G's tail huh? Damn :/
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