Gojira21 wrote:[“Remilia may I dock my Crucible into your Citadel?” Alex asked./quote]
Now that is just funny, man lol wow and damnit! Im a football coach and former athlete and i dont get the ladies ...psssht! lol
BUT...anyway great chapter, pretty funny! and i can picture remzilla sooo welll...>_>
Shadow wrote:Wait, it's coming back to me... I was a pony... oh god... Kiryu2012 is right beside me... no my clothes, stop taking them off- *Takes shotgun and commits suicide*
And now here I am.
Gojira21 wrote:Cool lol
“Oh! Okay! You mean like some of those people on TV that I would see daddy watching sometimes! The little boy said.
King Caesar wrote:I get the sexy slutty girl. Oh, gosh...BONER ALERT! I'm not much of a boob guy, ironically.“Oh! Okay! You mean like some of those people on TV that I would see daddy watching sometimes! The little boy said.
I gotta admit, I laughed out loud here. There are some awkward phrases here and there, but overall the sense of humor seems to be maturing and your writing is improving. Keep it up.
King Caesar wrote:Need I mention every moment in the chapter? It was great. Truly. And people are just like that online. No joke. I don't want to love on this planet after playing CoD with wanna-be gangster toddlers
MothraRocks wrote:Lol, this chapter made me laugh:
Klaus Jr and his funny one liners.
The true description of COD players
And how savage the guys were lol.
Really good stuff, I enjoyed the chapter. Plus I got at Lea Lol. Oh, and fireworks also help lol.
GodzillavsJason wrote:Thanks dude I'm glad you liked it dude and yeah it's about time you get some of that Lea.
MothraRocks wrote:GodzillavsJason wrote:Thanks dude I'm glad you liked it dude and yeah it's about time you get some of that Lea.
Mmhmm. I'd say it is
Also, what's the next episode about again?
SuperSaiyan4Godzilla wrote:And Godzilla isn't Pixar. The latter deals with children. The former deals with adults who behave like children.
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