"Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discussion

[HayesAJones]

I've already got several ideas for the next chap:

Got more ideas, but they're for later chapters.

Huh. Didn't realize you were writing this story.

Be satisfied with this: Heavy Weapons Megalodon will be making an appearance. Dunno when or how, but he will.

[kikomia]

I've already got several ideas for the next chap:

Got more ideas, but they're for later chapters.

Huh. Didn't realize you were writing this story.

I have an idea:

1. Do what the skreeonk you want, I'm satisfied anyway.



Anyway, can't wait for the new chapter

[MothraRocks]

2. Jake's avatar shows up, Gwangi falls in love with that avatar,

Dude. Stop. Please. :/


Anyways, I'm liking this story Hayes. Very good and filled with mystery.

[Flygon King]

2. Jake's avatar shows up, Gwangi falls in love with that avatar,

Dude. Stop. Please. :/

THANK YOU! I am sorry, but I think this forum as a whole has had enough Gwangi for a lifetime... Just, give the purple T-rex the rest and retirement he needs, Kiryu...

[HayesAJones]

Yep. I cut the very first fight in half.

That's just how the Hayesman rolls.

[Kiryu2012]

I totally loled at Gwangi's attempt at being badass, and Nue becoming a cobra herself was interesting. Not surprisingly, I liked when Derpy showed up. And Kiko and agrul's here too? This could be fun.

[MothraRocks]

Cmon Derpy, use the power of Friendship! C'MON!

Nice chapter, I Liked the little cliffhanger at the end, and the fight was quite good as well :)

[GodzillavsZilla]

I have two words to sum up what I just read......... SKREEONK' EPIC! This was complete epicness, even the pony. It was so epic, I can't explain how. I bet me and my avatar will have an awesome intro. Can not wait for the next chapter.

[Flygon King]

Nue as a giant cobra: EPIC WIN!

Gwangi failing to be epic: EPIC WIN!

Deep Coil proving to be a Wakeup Call Boss: EPIC WIN!

All in all, EPIC WIN!

[Gojira21]

Great chapter Hayes! I loved the fight! Good job

[SpanishBulldog63]

Another great chapter,Hayes.Really enjoyed the fight scene and looking forward to the next chapter,dude.

[kikomia]

That's me....YAY!

Nice chapter Hayes. I like Derpy. She is a cool pony.

[King Caesar]

Nue becomes a giant serpent, Derpy saves Nue, and Gwangi beats down Queen Coil. How do I contribute to the fight? I fire a few bullets and stand there looking pretty. Real cute, Hayes. Better not happen again, or else!

[HayesAJones]

That wasn't even you. That was Mac.

But you can be bait next chapter!

[Kiryu2012]

I'm wondering if perhaps our gang ends up on the moon, and could still survive since it's all in the Internet after all. Could we expect the gang to be in odd places like the ocean, or Tartarus?

[HayesAJones]

*shrug* I dunno. Honestly, I make this story up as I go along.

I haven't forgotten about this, by the way. I realize it's been a while, but been busy with a plethora of other projects. Will try and update soonish (as in a few days maybe).

[Flygon King]

Hmmm... not sure if Fanfict is dead or sound asleep... I truthfully cannot wait for the next chapter... and if the characters should head anywhere, then maybe a trip to Makai... May Shinki have pity on their souls if they go there...

[HayesAJones]

Not dead, I was just away from the house for a while and thusly unable to update. Now that I am back, a new chapter will be up soonish.

And then I'll be gone for another week. *shrug*

[Kiryu2012]

Not dead, I was just away from the house for a while and thusly unable to update. Now that I am back, a new chapter will be up soonish.

And then I'll be gone for another week. *shrug*

Oh wells, I can wait. I can already imagine our gang going to the Underworld, entering the TF2 universe to fight Monoculus, travel to the bottom of the sea, or encounter any of anyone's kaiju.

But whatever ideas you may have will be better, of that I'm sure.

[HayesAJones]

Nothing but the word 'MAYONNAISE' for fifty lines.

... or I finish the Queen Coil battle and introduce a second group of characters in a new POV.