STORY HERE: http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... 18&t=25688
Well here is my new story folks. I finally have it formatted nicely, sorry about the mess it was earlier, stil gettin used to coming back to posting long stories here.
I do hope ya'll enjoy it. Please do give me advice, criticism, opinions. I am seeking to improve as a writer and this is a story idea I had for a long time. Thanks for reading, as always.
A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
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Saansilt
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A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
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Re: A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
New chapter up. As always any feedback is appreciated. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Gawdziller wrote:I fully endorse this comment.
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Re: A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
Part 4 is now up. I battle the auto post merging yet again but now it is good. Comments, feedback and especially criticism are appreciated. Please do leave some. Thank you all.
Gawdziller wrote:I fully endorse this comment.
My One Shot, "That Which was Before":Chris55 wrote: Anyone else hear Groundskeeper Willie when they read that?
http://tohokingdom.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=22367
GODZILLA LIKE YOU'VE NEVER SEEN HIM BEFORE!
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Re: A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
Chapter Five has been posted. Comments, feedback, criticisms are very much appreciated and requested. Thank fellas.
Gawdziller wrote:I fully endorse this comment.
My One Shot, "That Which was Before":Chris55 wrote: Anyone else hear Groundskeeper Willie when they read that?
http://tohokingdom.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=22367
GODZILLA LIKE YOU'VE NEVER SEEN HIM BEFORE!
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Re: A king of song, a king of dance DISCUSSION
Would anyone be interested in me continuing this series where I make Godzilla a J-pop legend?
Gawdziller wrote:I fully endorse this comment.
My One Shot, "That Which was Before":Chris55 wrote: Anyone else hear Groundskeeper Willie when they read that?
http://tohokingdom.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=22367
GODZILLA LIKE YOU'VE NEVER SEEN HIM BEFORE!
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